Message in a Bottle

In room 6 we have been learning about narratives here is my message in a bottle.

One stormy day there were pirates on a really small old pirate ship. They found an empty bottle to write a message in. They put it in the ocean and sent it off for someone to find it. A couple of days later it washed up on the sand, a little girl picked it up and read it it said "give this key to a boat worker we are stuck in the ocean on a boat with coordinates" the little girl was scared she ran as fast as she could to the boat owner,  The boat owner said" hop on lets save them. "The little girl and the boat owner went so fast the girl called him Rocky. It took 24 minutes to get there when they got there the boat was a inch from going under water. The pirates jumped onto the boat and said "thank you for saving us", Rocky said "it's my pleasure "then they were all happy because the pirates had been saved.  In the end they lived happy ever after.

I enjoyed writing  this,  the challenging part was writing all this on my blog.

Do you liked my story?

simile

 In writing we have been learning about similes we have been using it to describe stuff.

My favourite part is describing it.

 

Diamante poem

 

Cat 

fluffy,cute

meow,cuddle,chase

lazy,tail,faithful,brave

fast,obey,beg,dig

energetic,pet

Dog