Message in a Bottle

In room 6 we have been learning about narratives here is my message in a bottle.

One stormy day there were pirates on a really small old pirate ship. They found an empty bottle to write a message in. They put it in the ocean and sent it off for someone to find it. A couple of days later it washed up on the sand, a little girl picked it up and read it it said "give this key to a boat worker we are stuck in the ocean on a boat with coordinates" the little girl was scared she ran as fast as she could to the boat owner,  The boat owner said" hop on lets save them. "The little girl and the boat owner went so fast the girl called him Rocky. It took 24 minutes to get there when they got there the boat was a inch from going under water. The pirates jumped onto the boat and said "thank you for saving us", Rocky said "it's my pleasure "then they were all happy because the pirates had been saved.  In the end they lived happy ever after.

I enjoyed writing  this,  the challenging part was writing all this on my blog.

Do you liked my story?

simile

 In writing we have been learning about similes we have been using it to describe stuff.

My favourite part is describing it.

 

Diamante poem

 

Cat 

fluffy,cute

meow,cuddle,chase

lazy,tail,faithful,brave

fast,obey,beg,dig

energetic,pet

Dog

elf on the shelf

A elf on the shelf

A elf on the self has a big brain for when your asleep for her or him to do pranks at night.they could put toilet paper all over the house or even eat all the cookies and put your blankets all over your room.

There can be red elves and green elves the red ones are more bad to do more pranks green ones are kinda nice the red ones has a red hat and stuffing in its body and the green ones have the same but softer the red one is naughty messy has a big brain smooth head and a big red hat  some with the green one but nice 

The red one likes to do lots of pranks the green one does not do pranks because he is more good  

They can lose there magic if you touch it 

They are really messy except the green one.

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Haere Mai, Talofa Lava, Mālō e Lelei , Maligayang Pagdating and welcome to my very own blog for learning. I look forward to sharing my learning with teachers, my school, my family and friends anywhere.